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Too Late
Realization came
Too late
Part of me knew when we parted that it was over
I still held on to a sliver of hope, praying
Too late
The winner gives it all but why have we both lost?
Who won?
Nobody
Realization came
Too late
You carved my heart out with your words and actions
Made me watch while you served it up for entertainment
You left me with nothing while you soared away with it all
Realization came
Too late
Who knew that an ocean existed in the eyes of a broken hearted woman
When they dry, the windows will close forever
Realization came
Too late
Dreams shatter with the wind that bears your name away
Tears wash away your scent from your pillow
Realization came
Too late
All I ever wanted was to love you and to have your love in return
Unconditionally
Realization came
Too late
I loved you then and I love you now
I will always love you
Realization came
Too late
But for who?
©2007-2009 ~radhika
:iconradhika:

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RR 17.09.07 Bangalore

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:iconshepaintswithblood:
This has a lot of emotion in it and the main emotion you portrayed very well I think. I like the ending, it definitely gives one something to think about. I like lines like
"Who knew that an ocean existed in the eyes of a broken hearted woman
When they dry, the windows will close forever"
Your wording was very good as well in this. Well done.:blackrose:

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:iconphataki-prema:
this is amazingly written

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